I'm of course learning by the day but compared to how it was before it should be an improvement at least. Quick update June 2019: Many complaints regarding the formatting, specifically spacing in conversations and of course the usage of the present tense in the first 36 chapters have been addressed. If you find yourself hating it early on, do convey your anger in a detailed comment or review :) I want to get better but without any feedback it's simply quite difficult. I'm a beginner at writing and my experience is incredibly lacking. Give it a shot and let me know what you think. There's magic, monsters and some numbers. She will be transported to another world rather conventionally and will be confronted with survival in the wild. Ilea Spears is your average sarcastic kick-boxing fast food worker and soon to be student. Contrary to the title the protagonist will be quite an offensive fighter. The fights should be interesting and aren't just numbers vs numbers. There are Litrpg elements here but I do hope it's not too heavy and annoying. Transported to another world, pretty standard fantasy setting with my amateur attempt to make it a bit dark but funny. A story I've started writing now quite a while ago.
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